i thought that section 1 was ok. the questions were a bit sneeky with hinting techniques i thought though. section two was quite good. did the landscape one. used it as a metaphor for the a previous experience and how i grew to cope with death by venturing on the journey. it was a load of bs but the markers dont seem to mind. section three was ok but i hated the quote. i said that the arrival may be emotional not physical. if so it does matter, but if not it is the process of the journey which matters most as the subject grows from the experience or is affected most by the process