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    Business Essay - Thesis Statement for a 'Discuss' Question?

    What should your first sentence of a BST Essay look like when responding to a 'Discuss' Question? All sources say the first sentence should always be to answer the question, but how can you do that with a discuss, where you provide points both for and against?
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    1984 general themes for skeleton essay

    I'd like to write a paragraph or so about every main theme in 1984, then just memorize them, then cut, paste, stretch, and amalgamate them in my exams. So my question is what are all the themes could NESA ask about? I'm assuming there will be about 7 or so, but could be very wrong (please...
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    how to write adaptable personal essays???

    our next eng ext 1 assessment task has an in class 25 mark personal essay component (we get like 40 mins to write it i think) for literary worlds and ik how to write a personal essay in response to a stimulus but how would you create one thats interesting/unique enough but also adaptable to a...
  4. momothemonkey

    bolshevik consolidation

    hey guys for anyone who's doing/has done russia and the ussr as a national study, what would you say was most significant/had the greatest impact on society/the effectiveness of their consolidation in terms of either political, social, economic (and why) - this is for an essay response, my...
  5. momothemonkey

    two or three paras for eng adv essays?

    for common mod and mod b essays are there any disadvantages to doing 2 paragraphs instead of 3 if you have the same amount of quotes across both formats? bc for prelims i did 2 paras and got the comment i needed more evidence but i used the same amount of evidence for my common mod at1 just...
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    Band 6 HSC Notes (Business | Eco | Eng Adv | SDD)

    Hey everyone! I recently completed my hsc and am selling all my notes and resources. I achieved a band 6 in all these subjects and have ranked first for all internally. Feel free to ask any questions or particular marks! :) Exemplar essays are $5 or $15 for essay pack Study notes are $5 a...
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    Is my handwiritng uhh.. Readable?

    I kinda wrote like this for my essays, a little tiny bit worse I'd say for conclusions/3rd body paragraphs.. uhh.. so, would HSC markers be able to decipher this? Last image is a pic of my 1984 trial essay, which surprisingly got me an 18/20 despite how rushed it was even seen from the...
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    Marking essays (english and/or eco)

    Hi would anyone be willing to mark/provide feedback on some essays preferably for free 😂 but i am willing to pay still if you got good marks and if u think ur skills r worth paying for
  9. Nami__800

    Vocabulary List

    Does anyone have a PDF or list of complex vocabulary I could use to make my essays and short responses sound more sophisticated? (and yes I looked through every website for a vocab list but they're not good enough)
  10. Nami__800

    Website for Band 6 Sample responses? (Eng Adv, Ext)

    I'm in year 10 and I really want to have a look at Band 6 responses so I can get better at writing. Does anyone know where I can find a library of samples? Like acehsc, thsc and stuff.
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    One-Off HSC Tutoring Sessions Available!

    Hey guys! I am a tutor who recently graduated from high school with a 95+ ATAR. I am currently offering thorough feedback services for past paper responses, including both essay and/or short-answer sections for as little as $12/section. This includes an estimated mark range and detailed advice...
  12. Canoeboat

    Reusing Essays

    hi guys, can u reuse ur essays from term 1 and 2 and use them in trials. Same quotes and explanation, just changed up a lil bit using feedback given.
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    Business studies essays help please

    hey guys how do I structure my BUSINESS SUDIES ESSAY if its not just about strategies? For example if there are two components? E.g if the question was: Analyse the relationship between market segmentation and marketing strategies. or Analyse the relationship between performance objectives...
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    Paper 1 English Advanced Tips

    HEY guys. how do you guys think I should tackle paper 1? like should I do the short answer first or essay first? In my trials I did essay first which my essay was quite good compared to a lot of other people but my short answer was really bad because of panic and running out of time. I guess I...
  15. tamdz

    predictions for 2023 hsc economics essay questions?

    ill still study everything of course but its best to have some you know better than others my teacher says that the other economy we studied in t1 (eg china or brazil) is likely but not too sure about anything else
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    Modern History 25/25 Russia Trial HSC Essay. Also Vietnam, core resources.

    Selling 25/25 Russia (top 5 selective school NSW) trial hsc on question: "Discuss the ways that Stalin's policies changed Russian society and culture in the period 1928-1948" for $6 respond to thread if interested. Will also give 2 full-mark trial hsc answers on core (nazi topic) and 2 90%...
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    English Advanced Essays (95/100 49/50)

    Hi, I am selling my English Advanced essays for $20 each. I got 99/100 and 49/50 in English Advanced and Extension trials. Common Mod - Merchant of Venice Mod A - The Meursault Investigation and The Stranger Mod B - T.S. Eliot Message if interested.
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    Assignment Help

    Assignments, essays, case studies, exam preparation and proof reading for high school students of all grades. I have over 5 years experience in assisting students to achieve their best. I provide a personalised service - 100% guaranteed original content, no copying and pasting from Google. I...
  19. souli

    How do I write with more sophistication and academic language?

    I am just wondering if anyone has any advice I could use to make my writing (particularly essays) more sophisticated, and more academic-sounding. Or how to expand my vocabulary to include higher-quality language. Thank you!
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    Marketing Essay Business studies URGENT HELP READ PLEASE

    Hi there, would anyone like to help give feedback on an essay I wrote about marketing strategies.I really need help in determining if the analysis and structure is effective and also which paragraph/s could be eliminated. Thank you! please let me know.
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