clarehenry
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so far,,,
"standing stiffly on"...
"standing stiffly on"...
Uhh, why are you writing about sex?"A deep thrill had descended down her rigid spine, offering her a slight sensation from his haunting breath that caressed the back of her neck; she had felt love in its purest form."
My style of writing is quite confusing. But it's basically the penultimate act before sex.
Well I'm playing on the idea of the loss of innocence. A mid-aged woman, plauged with insecurites, experiences the apparent feeling of "love" for the first time, yet the guy pleasuring her only wants to pleasure himself.Uhh, why are you writing about sex?
Hmm, nice story concept. Though, if I were writing it - I would prefer to use teenagers as the characters because I think that may work better from a realistic point of view.Well I'm playing on the idea of the loss of innocence. A mid-aged woman, plauged with insecurites, experiences the apparent feeling of "love" for the first time, yet the guy pleasuring her only wants to pleasure himself.
Peace.