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Hey, we're trying to study!!! This is our writer's showcase thread and you are invading it.... someone get the anthrax bomb!
 

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well done everyone they are all great

edit: only half of it is there at the moment
 
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does everyone use elliot!!!

this is the first time i have been to this site and i was dying to see some 4unit major works as i did poetry this year. and "ash" you are the thirsd person i have seen (i have seen four sets of work) who have used the quote "between the idea and the reality and the motion and the act falls the shaddow" i wonder who else would have used it too!!
 

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they were obviously rip-offs ... saw it and thought.. wow.. if i do that too i'll get an e4... :p
 

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Originally posted by susiewithasmile
"ash" you are the thirsd person i have seen (i have seen four sets of work) who have used the quote "between the idea and the reality and the motion and the act falls the shaddow" i wonder who else would have used it too!!
Really! Well, I come from the country and I was the only person doing poetry at my school... boo hoo!!!! Oh well, it's a good quote, Elliot is pretty sweet... she'll be right!!! No worries mate!
 
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lol no i wasn't criticising yor choice! i used it too!! and so did another girll doing poetry i knew. i think you put a really good slant on it in your poetry. i think you will do really well
 

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my MW is on a seperate post but i am desperate to get some feedback from other 4u ppl so ill put it here too.
its called 'in search of a dream' and is a critical price on the generic conventions in 'modern' fantasy literature and the relevant psycological explanations.

www.geocities.com/whotookwebby/work.html
P.S. GO TO "SUBMITTED VERSION" the other is 2000 words too long.
 

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yes hello!
well, i just had a whinge on my thread about no-one posting replies about my MW... so may as well join the part here!
if you have read it in silence, shame shame shame:) nah, just type something back- anything will do, i'm not picky
 

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ooo! good works. My special commendations to Saul for a moving story ( the last bit was fantastic, loved the way you ended it. 'be simple, be smart' huh?) All that glisters is not d'oh was an interesting piece too. :)
 

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