Very quick help on a sentence (1 Viewer)

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I'm not too sure on this sentence. Is it grammatically correct? I'm never sure when to use the ellipses.

"I am cold yet hot – laying in my bed, occasionally enduring the waves of pulsating pain of a headache which interrupts my trailing thoughts; my thoughts on life, love, my family, my mother...my regrets"
 

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