Suicide Warrior
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I was wondering, if anyone in Bored Of Studies have written any sort of poems or any songs just for the fun of it, if you do, please post it here and share it with the rest of us.
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Suicide Warrior
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ok, people have written poems and were afraid to share them because they are deep and meaningful or sometimes you think it's not good enough.
If you've written anything PLEASE post it here. Everything will be alright i promise.
cuz i, myself have written a lot of fucked up shit while i'm depressed. so if you can start posting your poems or songs you've written, i will post mine up.
it will all be totally cool, don't worry about anything
If you've written anything PLEASE post it here. Everything will be alright i promise.
cuz i, myself have written a lot of fucked up shit while i'm depressed. so if you can start posting your poems or songs you've written, i will post mine up.
it will all be totally cool, don't worry about anything
Here's one... I've posted it before, but I really like it 
...
Darkness
Darkness crowds your other senses
(you cant smell or touch or taste
when its too dark)
And people say
that your hearings enhanced
while in the dark.
But thats all a lie
because in the dark
your mind is trying too hard
to find shapes from sight.
Total darkness isnt so bad
because at least there
your brain gives up hope.
Its only when
theres a glimmer
or theres a flicker
of grey-blue light
that your brain goes mad.
Shadows merge and shift on the walls
while swirling serpents
and worms swim upon the surface
of your eyes.
A shape becomes a ghost
(a ghost becomes real)
in not-so-total darkness.
Perhaps
its darker than we know.
...Darkness
Darkness crowds your other senses
(you cant smell or touch or taste
when its too dark)
And people say
that your hearings enhanced
while in the dark.
But thats all a lie
because in the dark
your mind is trying too hard
to find shapes from sight.
Total darkness isnt so bad
because at least there
your brain gives up hope.
Its only when
theres a glimmer
or theres a flicker
of grey-blue light
that your brain goes mad.
Shadows merge and shift on the walls
while swirling serpents
and worms swim upon the surface
of your eyes.
A shape becomes a ghost
(a ghost becomes real)
in not-so-total darkness.
Perhaps
its darker than we know.
thanks for starting Loz! good work! i can relate to it
ok, i got into an argument with my dad last week and this is what came out...i'm still working on it, but i haven't been pissed off since then...
"all dead, no life, all said...and done
i am free but there is no sun........i am un-fettered but i feel severed....
all lies, no allies, all silence...from violence-
masks we wear because we're afraid of the stares
all space! no air! all warm but i'm ffrreeezing!!
...under blankets we hide so no one sees these tears inside..."
ok, i got into an argument with my dad last week and this is what came out...i'm still working on it, but i haven't been pissed off since then...
"all dead, no life, all said...and done
i am free but there is no sun........i am un-fettered but i feel severed....
all lies, no allies, all silence...from violence-
masks we wear because we're afraid of the stares
all space! no air! all warm but i'm ffrreeezing!!
...under blankets we hide so no one sees these tears inside..."
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Suicide Warrior
Member
this is one of my songs i've written, quite depressed really and it's one of the few songs that i've written that's not too hard to understand. (i hope). there is no real title for the song yet.
(Verse1)
Guess what it never bothers me
watching the world collapse in front of me
what on earth is going on in my head?
my adorable death is finally on it's way.
(chorus)
This life is a big rejection
my skin, screams for infection
the wreckage came out of the blue
i wonder will this ever heal?
(verse2)
There's a hate i can't control
it discards me from myself
I searched for a different pain
it left me full of dark regrets
(verse3 ending)
close your eyes
dreams of insane
bleed you dry
close your eyes
and you'll suddenly realise
you're on your way to die!!!!!!
so here it is, wether it's good or shit, you'll be the judge of that.
(Verse1)
Guess what it never bothers me
watching the world collapse in front of me
what on earth is going on in my head?
my adorable death is finally on it's way.
(chorus)
This life is a big rejection
my skin, screams for infection
the wreckage came out of the blue
i wonder will this ever heal?
(verse2)
There's a hate i can't control
it discards me from myself
I searched for a different pain
it left me full of dark regrets
(verse3 ending)
close your eyes
dreams of insane
bleed you dry
close your eyes
and you'll suddenly realise
you're on your way to die!!!!!!
so here it is, wether it's good or shit, you'll be the judge of that.
Suicide Warrior
Member
yeah i liked your poems too Loz, sadly this is as far as this post goes, since no one else have the slightest courage to share their piece.
Good work to those who have shared their work, really appreciated.
Good work to those who have shared their work, really appreciated.