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rosie rose

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ok gang, here it is.
no reflection statement, because basically, i couldn't be bothered
just ignore the budget signatures, they're just to give a general idea- (i did the real ones by hand)
also if there are any apostrophes missing, ignore it cause the attachment deleted them all for some strange, strange and wonderful reason of its own!
 

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Hey Rosie,

I like Laverne's story - well, the idea of her father anyway. :)
Excellent work! Makes me wish I'd picked short story instead.
 

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Wow, downloaded 72 times and not more than two comments.

Depressing. *pats rosie on the head consolingly*
 

rosie rose

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aww, thank you for the inspiring post, tree:) and damn you for only having one left!!!
grr!!:) (ext1, historyext, drama)
correction: 80 times now- it must be so fab, everyone's dumbstruck at my splendour...
that's what i tell myself, anyhoo!
 

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Or maybe you've gone delusional, lapsed into hallucinatory unconciousness at moments, and downloaded it yourself to boost your flagging ego. :D

Have fun History and Drama after I'm done. :)
 

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Or maybe you've gone delusional, lapsed into hallucinatory unconciousness at moments, and downloaded it yourself to boost your flagging ego. :D

Have fun History and Drama after I'm done. :)
 

rosie rose

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readers, this is just rude... i know i sound like a nagging housewife now but...COME ON!
downloaded 107 times, there has to be at least one person (other than daemontreu and s.s. sugar
who are lovely) who have not been brought up in a pigsty... actually, don't quite know
what pigs have to do with anything... am just a little p.o ed...
and where are all these gallants who promised feedback (jethro, saul et al. this means YOU)
tsk tsk
 

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i was going to... but you know...
 
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little dark fingers
the first and last sections seem more like poetry and short story
(not that im complaining)
i really like that concept
its funny exploring trilogies of words:
rubber bullet kisses
black hole sun
they make sense, but often it becomes a personal experience of the reader
interesting hey?

i really like your poems
 

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i'm going to do the opposite of everyone else and not download your thing (i dislike reading), but i'm going to post a comment

rosie: I sense greatness- nay -spectactular splendor emanating from your aura like a pungent smell. Keep at it!

:)
 

rosie rose

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thank you, ssssonic
personally i have always quietly shared your very perceptive and intelligent assessment of my greatness
(except, perhaps, for the pungent smell bit, which we'll overlook for now)
 

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