Help!!! (1 Viewer)

[mazza!]

To anyone that can give me an opinion...
to what extent do you think ive gone to far in respect to the descriptions of the more sexual nature of my work? cause one of my main characters is a pervert adn i need to know to what extent i can explain his "crimes"

 

[sleepplease]

Go as far as you want. You can write about whatever you want. Don't be stupid though. THere is a difference between erotica and being descriptive. In my poetry I have a degrading sex scene, followed by God watching the reruns as a porn clip he's making. It's not erotica though, and not too much is said explicity. Remember that what you want to do is give your characters impression, you want to SHOW who he is, not tell...

 

[mazza!]

thanks alot!!!