lollylover
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- 2009
I really don't like my story idea. It's about this adopted girl who goes back to the country where she came from, and even though she looks like everyone, she can't understand them, nor they her because of the language barriers.
It's just the idea, and I've been doing all these practices, adapting it around different stimulus, but i still find faults in it everywhere.
It got a 12/15 for the trials, and my teacher keeps telling me that it's good, but I'm just not happy with it.
Any ideas?
It's just the idea, and I've been doing all these practices, adapting it around different stimulus, but i still find faults in it everywhere.
It got a 12/15 for the trials, and my teacher keeps telling me that it's good, but I'm just not happy with it.
Any ideas?