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Belonging Extended Response (1 Viewer)

Fadee

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Hey Guys,

I just wanted to ask if im on the right track here.

For my belonging extended response i have to do The Crucible by Arthur Miller, i have chosen for my related text to do the movie "Mean Girls" as it relates heavily to my concepts which are:


  • [FONT=&quot] [/FONT]The element of how common difficulty and experiences effect how closely a relationship is bonded, whether it is for the good or the bad.[FONT=&quot][/FONT]
  • [FONT=&quot] [/FONT]Ethics, morals and values determine whether belonging is the top priority and ultimately affecting someone’s character in order to belong.

Is there anything else you think i need to work on ?

The Extended response includes a quote which we have to answer, i just wanted to ask if we deconstruct the quote in the Introduction or in the first paragraph, and also, do we do like a 2 sentence introduction for the texts we use?

Thanks
 

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