are you bored? (1 Viewer)

[beemz]

i wrote a practice essay, which took me forever, way longer than 40mins :S and it is waaay too long, but i have no idea what to cut out, what to write, what is needed/ not... :S
if there are any bored individuals out there keen on english and willing to go through it for me id appreciate it sooo much..
if not...
ok..
ill live..
cool thanks
:$

 

[hopeles5ly]

i wrote a practice essay, which took me forever, way longer than 40mins :S and it is waaay too long, but i have no idea what to cut out, what to write, what is needed/ not... :S
if there are any bored individuals out there keen on english and willing to go through it for me id appreciate it sooo much..
if not...
ok..
ill live..
cool thanks
:$

fire away.