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heaps finished!! argh!!!! :burn: "- coming to the realisation that all my past concepts and ideas that I ditched had somehow wormed their way into the story" yeah same, and cant be bothered booting them again. theyre like unwanted renters who just wont fuckin leave

haha same, damn that teen angst, so hard to avoid. hopefully mines "sophisticated" enough *sigh* only 3 days! i still need an ending!/ plotline!!!! :worried:

1. What's the title of your story? atm "secret chords" 2. What's the name of one of the main characters? Joni 3.Is/are they guys/girls? Girl, guys 4. What is one setting/location? rivershore/rivermouth/beachside, aust 5. If you could pick a genre in which your story would be most...

wow thanks heaps glitterfairy :) gotta get this damn thing done, but now trials are in the way! time is running oooout but youre advice is helpin a lot. you wanna read mine and then offer criticisms? i need to know if its too angsty. and non-sense-making

im sitting on about 4500 words and am utterly stuck, and i hate a massive chunk of it for being to cliched. im struggling to write the report without having done the actual MW everyone who reads it is like 'its good.. but i dont get it' problem is im struggling to make it mean something too grrr...

atm my title is "secret chords".. it works well with my stories. but thats subject to change first 5 words: caught a music its person they from swaying in Against and welts delicate face are in a this...etc Open from becomes shelter Waits hush glow horizon i think i like the last one best..

"walking down the" "the wooden sign" 'welcome, stranger, to" "now i'm lying" "i never told" "the fine nettles" "the sky above" "she sits and" "thick raindrops hang" "words of love'

im so screwed alos. my creative was quite the shitty, rambling metaphor which really didnt turn out like it was sposed to. i hated it. and my responding was reasonable xept my refernces to the stimulus were too implicit, and i kinda got off track.... let's just say very very crap. and it...

omg yeah, exactly how i feel. tres strange. nonetheless i think i'll do alright- but not as well as i should/could have, but aint that always the case. *sigh* anyone who did 'human story' as option -- were you overly screwed for the last question? i SWEAR that wasn't in the sylabus. + there...

lol yeap... but i so don't wanna hurt him any more than i have. he's truly gorgeous and SO much like me, as in we have heaps in common. its like i love him as a person, and i know how great, wonderful, sweet he is, etc, but i dont love him as a boyfriend any more.....which is weird, but yeah...

lol yes!!!! i love the simpsons i have watched one and a half episodes of idol, and it was where (anthony? lil italian dude) sang that gorgeous italian song in that gorgeous voice- fell in love with him there and then. COurtney is v. talented also- actually they all were/are. i saw ricki lee...

lol soz bout that msg lol bit 2 much info 4 u

i thought i did- told him i didnt think i loved him anymore. he got all hurt, said he couldn't stand to lose me, i was the best thing that had ever happened to him, best thing in his life, etc. and so at the moment he still calls me and we talk about crap, and we see each otha at school. but...

we don't get textbooks, else i would

no its NOT my fault. I have had all this yr 11/yr 12 crap on and its ALWAYS in the periods of history/geog + i had exams as well, which ruled out another huge lump of lessons. i was exaggerating- i didn't sleep through all my classes. The ones i was at, i actually tried to concentrate and...