Very nice.
Like the double meanings to the story.
Great idea- just need to write it correctly + try not to disguise the double meaning of the women to the alcohol too much so that the reader can attain that twist/meaning when he/she reads it.
contrast to the general public is the general tech. used.
The scene where the camera pans out of the residential area showing all of the cars reversing out of their homes to go to work- highlights the concept of how everything is almost practically the 'same' and unified. Hence they all...
Just need some assistance in the ideas of my speech. I'm doing 'The Red Tree' by Shaun Tan, 'My People' by the presets and 'As You Like It' by william Shakespeare as the three related texts- the task and speech is as follows:
We have been assigned an assessment task focusing on our speaking...