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I'm looking for an A or B grade response based on techniques like structure/forms. Where it is comparison to an unseen text, or another text in general

I want to know how to integrate 2 dif texts in a paragraph structurally
 
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is my exam worth, or what i'm looking for?

my exam is out of 15 i think. (probably Intro + 2 paragraphs + conclusion)

i'm looking for an above 10 response (I'm unsure how to compare in one paragraph only)
intro 3-4 lines. composed of 1 conceptual topic sentence that explores the related theme of both texts. then follow with - Whilst text 1 does theme through___text 2 does theme through____
bp-1 - topic sentence. 2-3 sentences of WHILST text 1 does theme X thru ___. Then linking sentence for eg- HOWEVER text 2 does thematic exploration through___ then 2 anayltical snetence.
Conluding/reader reflection senetnce compounded into 1

repeat for another bp


conclusion. no one cares about conclusions so just cap off with a reiterated topic snetence and. eg- Thus to a great extent text 1 does ____________text 2 does________________
 

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intro 3-4 lines. composed of 1 conceptual topic sentence that explores the related theme of both texts. then follow with - Whilst text 1 does theme through___text 2 does theme through____
bp-1 - topic sentence. 2-3 sentences of WHILST text 1 does theme X thru ___. Then linking sentence for eg- HOWEVER text 2 does thematic exploration through___ then 2 anayltical snetence.
Conluding/reader reflection senetnce compounded into 1

repeat for another bp


conclusion. no one cares about conclusions so just cap off with a reiterated topic snetence and. eg- Thus to a great extent text 1 does ____________text 2 does________________
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
i was so confused as someone else said that i should only talk abt the first text in 1 paragraph, then the second text in comparison to the first in the 2nd paragraph.

I asked my teacher today and she said "most higher grade responses integrate them in the same paragraph"
 

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THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
i was so confused as someone else said that i should only talk abt the first text in 1 paragraph, then the second text in comparison to the first in the 2nd paragraph.

I asked my teacher today and she said "most higher grade responses integrate them in the same paragraph"
no prob

yeah just do the two texts in 1 bp as i wrote. the easy way tho is just to link them in the middle through the HOWEVER IN COMPARIOSN TEXT 2 DOES ______etc. Then just answer in the audeince reflection and ur good :)
 

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