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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    Also for those that wanted to know ive called it 'One step ahead' as from the actual story. The main character is one step ahead of people experiencin grief and blah blah and eventually returning to a place she belonged, but the title is far from important, far far far from it lol
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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    The teacher wants me to restructure it a little starting with the scattering and then lead back up to that point again but how would i link the end to the beginning in a structural sense so its not out of place. Also now that the ending is at the beginning, the same problem arises in the...
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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    Im still trying to think of title to go with it, any ideas.
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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    No i didnt force it, when i read over it i realised i'd done it. When i finnish ill copy and paste if you like and you can tell me what ive done wrong and ill fix it up first before i give it in to the teacher to draft, as i said before, i have 7 weeks to draft it so it will develop over that...
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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    I wrote something similar when i did the creative writing piece on journeys, and i have read the high range response your talking about, it was really good. I have a few weeks to draft it with the teacher which will be good. So it will develop. As for what will happen to the protagonist, she...
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    Creative writing (assessment) what do you think

    So ive started writing my piece of creative writing, it will be a 1500 word narrative focussing on belonging. My idea so far is the beginning is focused on a letter, which a deceased fathers daughter reads, ive emphasised a connection (sense of belonging) to this letter from the daughter as...
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    Popular Culture. Please Help! :)

    I see that you on this aswell, were doing continuity and change at the moment, popular culture is next for us.
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    Serious PIP Idea, what do you think???

    Thanks Jesse, as for the methdolodies i was going to do a personal reflection, interview and questionnaire, my uncles wife is chinese and would be happy to be interviewed, her being an only child and a girl was frowned upon by her family especially when she became pregnant and was also having a...
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    Serious PIP Idea, what do you think???

    How strange, i was going to do the same topic before i settled on my current one.
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    Serious PIP Idea, what do you think???

    It came through a lightbulb moment I was thinking about looking into the dilemmas of an only child regarding social interaction in society. More so how it compare to individuals that have siblings, through my secondary research i have began to realise that siblings do play a role in ones...
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    Biology OR Society and Culture?!

    Do society and culture, i had the same issue myself, it has turned out to be the most interesting subject in my HSC, im currently starting my Personal Interest project which is starting to take my interest and its actually really rewarding. If you apply yourself the marks and outcomes are easy...
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