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Hey princy sorry didnt get back for so long, I wantd to give it a proper read before commentng on it :) I enjoyed reading teh story. The good things first: very strong characterisation. She's definitely not the kind of person you meet everyday but she's very "real", if you know what i mean...

Princy i thought urs was actualy about ants!! Silly me. but i'm thinking that because in my story i'm writing about ants as a metaphor for human society. When i read ur title i thought dammit, someone else is doing the exact same thing! I'm on the first couple of pages and reading pretty...

Here's mine...it's a short story called Litchi. Read away. It's about ants :P Everyone else's looks really good. I'm on first page city of dreams, it reminds me of the movie city of god, it's also about a journalist

'tis the best feeling hey. I thought it feels a bit weird, you've been spending so many hours on it, or thinknig abuot it and procrastinatng since this time last year, and now it's just....finished. I despised my story until I rewrote it from the beginning on monday (mine was due this mornign...

With mine, Im writing a short story which explores the extent of man's free will, through the metaphor of an ant colony actually. It's a bit like Orwell's animal farm. You know how ants act as individuals when they're alone but like one giant organism when they're together, so it's a fertile...

Hi, I noticed that most of the tutors here are ex-students. I'm not really looking for someone to tutor me with the content of the course, I'm looking for someone to mark my practice past-papers. I usually know the answers to most of the questions but I would only get in the low 90s because...

If holden man, who is coming first in his school, gets 50 for his external, he will get a 50 for his internal. If he gets a 48 for his external, and no one else gets above 48 in the school for their external, holden will get 48 for his internal. If he bumps out and gets 47 in the...

Does anyone have any old prac tests lying around? I was punished badly on my first prac test, I couldnt find anything to prepare for it. Any tips? my next prac coming up is on motors and generators. My teacher said practise on some of the old tests, but i have no idea where they are now. If...

There are so many different theories, some of them are quite unrelated to each other so you can't really bring up everything all in one essay in 1 hour. I was hoping i could just isolate one or two concerns, i was going to focus just on concepts of the Self and maybe a few other related...

I'm looking for an extra mentor, I'm doing a Postmodern short story basically about globalisation. everything has to be about globalisation these days so if those are ur area of expertise, ur help will be much appreciated. I just want someone i can email my stuff to like once every fortnight...