SDD would be fine ... if it was less concerned with the shit that goes along with it. Different approaches, documentation, why it's so important to make a quality product. It would be better if it just got more into the actual designing of programs and approaching problems, rather than the...
Yeah, I'm using Stairway to Heaven. I've found it to be good cause its crammed full of technique.
Couple of things are:
repetition of "it makes we wonder" - link the wondering to imaginative journeys, i.e. wondering is going on an imaginative journey.
references to nature - "in a tree by the...